Sunday, September 11, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Here's another six from FORESHADOW, book one of The Shadow Imperium! How would you like to have Rae's crazy nightmares?

The fog thickened around me and began to coalesce. I could hear laughter echoing from within the fog. It was horrifying. I couldn’t get past whatever was forming behind me. I threw my hands over my head in a futile attempt to protect myself and crouched down, sobbing hysterically. I was expecting the worst, but praying for a miracle . . .


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9 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 11, 2011 at 6:04 AM

    This is a great six. I love the last line, and don't we all...Expect the worst and pray for a miracle?

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  2. Sandra NachlingerSeptember 11, 2011 at 10:23 AM

    Good description of a gloomy scene. Creepy and scary.

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  3. Siobhan MuirSeptember 11, 2011 at 1:48 PM

    Uh-oh, that can't be good. Great six! :)

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 11, 2011 at 3:48 PM

    Run away! Sounds terrifying, poor thing.

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  5. AnonymousSeptember 11, 2011 at 4:55 PM

    Pray for a miracle. Love the fog transforming into something, well sort of, real

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  6. Sherry GloagSeptember 12, 2011 at 12:26 PM

    Awesome emotionally packed six.

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  7. 1000th.monkeySeptember 12, 2011 at 6:35 PM

    creepy, but the re-use of 'fog' twice in two sentences really jumped out at me.

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  8. Brea EssexSeptember 12, 2011 at 7:04 PM

    Thanks for pointing that out, 1000th.monkey! I didn't notice that before.

    Thanks for all the other comments everyone!

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  9. UnknownSeptember 13, 2011 at 1:50 AM

    I can feel her terror! Well written!

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