Sunday, August 28, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday


             I had no idea where Logan had gotten his skill with swords. Maybe it was just a natural outcome of his training in self-defense. His two swords moved as if they were two halves of the same weapon and that weapon was an extension of him.
            The fight moved so quickly I could barely see what was happening. One of the devils’ swords caught one of Logan’s weapons. The flats of the blades slid across each other and Logan’s wrist twisted, his sword clattering to the floor.

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6 comments:

  1. Sword fighting woohoo. I'm such a sucker for a man who can wield a blade....innuendo or not.

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  2. So much energy and pace in these six sentences and great hook. What happens next?

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  3. Great image-I could see him swinging those swords, hear the clang of metal hitting metal.

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  4. I love a good fight scene! Very nice! Great six.

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  5. wow, I like a warrior with two swords! :-D
    Barb

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  6. great scene, well written!

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