Sunday, July 24, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Here's another six sentences from "Ouroboros", book one of The Zayin Chronicles:


I watched in shock as a blade appeared, glinting in the middle of his chest.  The boy’s eyes opened wide, and he slumped to the floor.  I began to scream shrilly, my shrieks reverberating through my head as they bounced around the narrow enclosure behind me.  Another boy stood behind him, his sandy hair gleaming even in the poor lighting.  He twisted the blade in the fallen boy’s body, and then cruelly jerked it out.  He calmly pulled a cloth from his pocket and cleaned the sharp edge that was now dull from a dark substance. 


Check back next Sunday for another six!



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11 comments:

  1. I'll be checking back next week. A very intense scene

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  2. Great scene, pulling the knife from the chest is visual and heartless. I love it :)

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  3. Great tension packed scene. Wonder what's going to happen next

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  4. Super intense six. Thank you for sharing that snippet.

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  5. Wow, now that made me shiver. Great six!

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