Sunday, July 31, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Here's another six sentences from "Ouroboros", book one of The Zayin Chronicles!


“Well, I never wanted to get involved in—in—whatever this is!”  I jumped up and headed for the door.  There was a large, muscled man blocking my way, his back turned to me.  I reached out to tap his shoulder to ask him to move . . . and my hand passed through him.  I froze and turned toward Zac, wide eyed.  “Am I dead?” I whispered, my voice trembling.


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10 comments:

  1. Oh my! That is a shocker. I just sooooo want to know more. Great six

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  2. Holy crap. I'm surprised she can talk at all. What a shock.

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  3. Yep, I'd say that's a clue she's dead. Enjoyed your six.

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  4. What a great last line! Must have been a shocker for sure.

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  5. Oh, this is intriguing! I'm wondering if she'd dead, too, or if the man is a ghost. Great snippet!

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  6. I hadn't seen that coming! I love it! Can't wait for more

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